Mortgage Persuasive Speech

Good evening State farm I am writing to convince you to give my family and I a mortgage on a two story house. My credit score is 710 and I have an annual income of 150,000 dollars. That’s just the numbers that I submitted to you but that’s just half of my argument. I would like this mortgage for my growing family. I have two sons and a daughter on the way and I want them to have a childhood in a neighborhood they would be able to ride their bikes around the block. The property that I am looking at has a nice and big back yard so I can practice baseball with my sons. So my husky can actually have room to run around unlike in the apartment that we are currently in. I want to acquire this mortgage so that I can fulfil my dream of having a big
family in a house that I can own sooner or later. So that I can maybe one day pass on this house to my kids and they could pass on to their kids. This house would be the start of something for my family to always remember. To keep my tradition of having my entire family over for the holidays and have them stay at my house and enjoy themselves. I want my kids to create memories in a house that they can call their own. I am willing to take on this mortgage so that I can create these memories.