My Controversie-Personal Narrative

Today was June 4, and the bus was coming to a halt in front of my gray, two story house. I threw my backpack up on my shoulders and grabbed the black French Horn case sitting next to me. Starting at the sunny blue sky, a warm sensation was on my skin. Not long after, me and Josie had passed the first seat. We quickly said thank you to the bus driver, Joel. And jumped off the bus side by side with a wide smile on our faces. We were both free from school for a whole weekend. Without any sports or sibling events, I was positive that we would be spending the whole weekend together. Then Josies voice interrupted my thoughts.
“Hey Anna, do you want to come over to my house and swim?” Josie yelled, crossing her fingers behind her back. Hoping that my answer would be yes.
“Oh, I would love to Josie!” I yelled back, with a smile spreading across my face. As she walked away, my smile faded.
I forgot I have to do chores,” I exclaimed, disappointed. After a few minutes of thought, my conscious told me that I should spend my weekend with Josie, and skip the list of chores, I mean I did say yes to her question. Many minutes had passed, and I was walking over to a large, gray house, that was a 3 story. Josies family had quite a bit of money, since her dad was a doctor and her mom was a secretary. Once I got there, Josie was at the back gate greeting me in. As she unlocked the gate, both of us darted into the pool. For a hour, me and Josie did three sixty's, pencils, diving, flips, and water basketball. We both had so much fun. And I couldn’t wait to spend the next day with her too. Or at least that’s what I had