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My Defining Moment
The hands that I look down upon can’t be mine, why because they’re covered in blood. But they must be, I also taste the blood on my lips every time I breathe. I can’t feel my face, all I feel is the adrenaline rushing through me. The blood, the adrenaline, and the metallic taste, all mixed together is too much. I start running to my mom. I can’t yell because if I do the blood will get in and the taste will remind me of how hurt I am. How could such a childhood experience end in blood and a broken bone? When I was younger I was just as bold as any kid that I know; however, one experience changed that, a broken nose. I was eight-years-old. The wind was crisp and warm, the grass was like little feathers tickling my feet when I ran on it. When I ran I could feel the warm, summer air hit my face that just made me run faster to get more air. The sun was like a spot light just on me as I ran faster and faster to the swing set. I ran and laid my belly on the cold plastic seat. I went up and I envisioned myself in my mind’s eye that I was superman. I went back and forth for a time, until my momentum left me. The excitement never did, so I ran back to my starting point and did it again. The time flew by while the excitement also slowly lost its edge. …show more content…
The rebellion has begun. The growl of a caged animal came from my torso. I put it off. Then out of nowhere I got hit, over and over. The rebellion needed to be quenched if I want my torso not to be damaged. I painfully walked over to my porch and went up the Mt. Everest of wooden planks. Limping up bit by bit. If not for my will to survive, I don’t think I would have. The edge of my vision blurred. I wasn’t going to make it. The will to survive was leaving me. I wouldn’t make it, so I made one last pleading cry. My mom came out with a plate of food like a deity who had heard my call. I decided against sacrificing any goats to

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