Preview

My Mother Never Worked

Good Essays
Open Document
Open Document
489 Words
Grammar
Grammar
Plagiarism
Plagiarism
Writing
Writing
Score
Score
My Mother Never Worked
Purpose and Audience
1. What point is the writer trying to make? Why do you suppose her thesis is never explicitly stated?
The author’s whole (main) point of in the essay is to make the reader feel sympathy for her mother, because of the hardships she went through working on a farm while raising eight children, which leads us to believe she is deserving of the Social Security benefit check. Another point is general; even though, women does do so much work towards their home, they don't get any credit from our society.
I suppose that…
(When doing this type of writing do not use words like: whole, all, everyone, everybody, always, etc. The Social Security rules (in the U.S.) were originally set up as a pension for people who earned pay and paid into the system. There is no indication in the text that woman who work at home do not recieve credit from society.)
2. This essay appeared in Ms. magazine and other publications whose audiences are sympathetic to feminist goals. Could it just as easily have appeared in a magazine whose audience was not? Explain.
I think it could easily appear in a magazine whose audience was not sympathetic to feminist goals. I would say it would not be the most readable topic, and it is probably would have a lot of argumentations and critics after all.
(This is a story of rural life in the early 20th Century. This essay could have been written about a man - it is more about how people lived in difficult times. Consider a man who worked hard all of his life during the same times and when he became disabled he would have received the same answer from the Social Security office.)
3. Smith-Yackel mentions relatively little about her father in this essay. How can you account for this?
She does this because she is disappointed to hear that her mother never worked by the person on the phone. The author tried to show as many details about her mother`s work as possible; Smith-Yackel gains empathy throughout the essay for her mother by

You May Also Find These Documents Helpful

  • Good Essays

    After Edelman and her husband had their little girl, she began to notice how infrequently her husband was home. Her husband increased his hours at work, while she cut back hers to be home with their daughter. Edelman expresses her anger toward her husband to the reader when he became the primary source of income and she became the main parent.…

    • 295 Words
    • 1 Page
    Good Essays
  • Satisfactory Essays

    4. Explain the purpose of chapter five. What point about the community is the author trying to get across to the reader?…

    • 1157 Words
    • 5 Pages
    Satisfactory Essays
  • Satisfactory Essays

    Undoubtedly, some of the language in this week’s assigned reading challenges readers. The context journal helps students meet this challenge by identifying:…

    • 350 Words
    • 2 Pages
    Satisfactory Essays
  • Good Essays

    Everything you discuss should be tied back to the author’s thesis. You’re discussing the various strategies used by the author to make his or her point and the effectiveness of those strategies to make the author’s point.…

    • 615 Words
    • 3 Pages
    Good Essays
  • Powerful Essays

    According to Pateman, men consider woman natural dependence, always in need of defending and male protection. In the welfare state, this notion of protection relates to economic stability through non-domestic employment, a form of citizenship. Employment gives employees a stake in the larger society, a feeling of a civic community. In the private sector, the male is the breadwinner and protector of the family’s societal status. In the contemporary era, women hold jobs and professions, but are still excluded from citizenship. Women face high segregation and pay inequity, which occurred because “capitalist economies are patriarchal…[and] are clustered at the lower end of the lower end of the occupational hierarchy.” Women have been excluded from the labor force, but now that they are forced to undertake unskilled and low paying professions or other professions that perpetuate their roles as nurtures or caretakes. Such roles reduce any chance of women enjoying citizens in the traditional path that men do. Pateman made compelling arguments. However, her criticisms of the welfare state seem to discredit the successes it has in alleviating some of the burdens of property. Further, welfare aids individuals without financial or political means to feel as participants in society. Patenam could have used more contemporary examples (1980s) to expand her argument. Whereas Patenam’s piece focused on the…

    • 1373 Words
    • 6 Pages
    Powerful Essays
  • Good Essays

    When Jesus Came

    • 344 Words
    • 2 Pages

    One Weakness presented in the book is concerning times when there is not even a slight reference to the thesis, for extended amounts of time, in order to connect the subjec to the point the author’s trying to make. It seemed a lot like a textbook and had a form that certainly placed too much responsibility upon the shoulders of the reader to ensure the advancement of the book’s premise. The author did not identify with his audience…

    • 344 Words
    • 2 Pages
    Good Essays
  • Satisfactory Essays

    Write a basic thesis statement and a revised thesis statement in response to the writing prompt.…

    • 243 Words
    • 1 Page
    Satisfactory Essays
  • Good Essays

    It sometimes takes both the man and woman to run a household and whichever chooses to complete the job from home is no different than that of the one working outside the home. Just because the men is normally the one going to work it does not necessarily mean that he is the sole decision maker. Just because the majority of women are not as strong as men it does not mean they cannot do the same job. Lots of men admired a women who could support herself because the cost of living was so high (Eastman).…

    • 788 Words
    • 4 Pages
    Good Essays
  • Satisfactory Essays

    Rhetorical analysis

    • 574 Words
    • 2 Pages

    to their western counterparts , their were certain points within the literary work that was appealing to certain emotions and points of many audiences. In Paragraph one the introduction specifically speaks from mainly a logos appeal or an appeal to ones emotion. She describes the child rearing of western parents and how she disapproves of the methods used by said parents. Also she brings up the parenting strategies and anxiety of western parents when it comes to caring for their children, always thinking of the wants and needs of the child but going about…

    • 574 Words
    • 2 Pages
    Satisfactory Essays
  • Good Essays

    To the tarain

    • 860 Words
    • 4 Pages

    2. What do you make of the final sentence of the essay? How is the earlier extended theme of annihilated time related to and resolved in the ending of the essay?…

    • 860 Words
    • 4 Pages
    Good Essays
  • Powerful Essays

    With reference to your own detailed examples, explore the representation of women in the media today.…

    • 1934 Words
    • 8 Pages
    Powerful Essays
  • Satisfactory Essays

    College drop out boom

    • 306 Words
    • 2 Pages

    (3) Why did the writer write this essay? Is he qualified to make the statements he has made? Why or why not?…

    • 306 Words
    • 2 Pages
    Satisfactory Essays
  • Good Essays

    The White Umbrella

    • 333 Words
    • 2 Pages

    In the middle of the story, her mom tells her where she is working, but is even more disappointed. She still thinks it is like being poor. The narrator asks her mom to quit. Another reason why she does not want her to work is that the mom forgot them at practice. “” My mother’s almost here,” I said “she’s on her way.”…“…You’ve been out here an hour already.””…

    • 333 Words
    • 2 Pages
    Good Essays
  • Better Essays

    The fact of work for women was contradictory since businesses desired women to work for them to make money they were losing, and they knew women could not refuse. Some men were so ashamed of their non-existent jobs that they abandoned their wives and families. A 1940 survey revealed that 1.5 million women had been abandoned after their husbands lost their jobs to The Depression (Gervase). Men were so afraid of losing their authority in the household that they felt it was women to blame, however, it could not be further from the truth. The public media drilled the view into people that women were somehow at fault for wanting work in hard times to support their families. Men saying it was irresponsible for leaving their duties at home for something as ‘ridiculous’ as working. More than half of all employed women in the 1930s worked more than fifty hours a week and one-fifth of those worked over fifty-five hours. (“Working Women” ) Even with this extreme work environment, and hours, a woman’s annual pay was only $525 to a man's $1027, and yet people still said that women were undeserving of work and steal their money (“Working Women” ). Women were constrained into taking the low wage even if it did not meet their home expenses. During the Depression women’s wages dropped lower than ever, and businesses took advantage of…

    • 1064 Words
    • 5 Pages
    Better Essays
  • Satisfactory Essays

    HIS 105 Assignment 2

    • 474 Words
    • 2 Pages

    For the first part of this assignment you will create a thesis statement. A thesis statement is usually a single sentence somewhere in your first paragraph that presents your main idea to the reader. The body of the essay organizes the material you gather and present in support of your main idea. Keep in mind that a thesis is an interpretation of a question or subject, not the subject itself. (Note: Students please consult Stanford University’s Website with tips on how to construct a proper thesis, the webpage can be found at:http://www.stanford.edu/~steener/handouts/thesis.htm…

    • 474 Words
    • 2 Pages
    Satisfactory Essays