All of my previous writing experience has involved academic writing, so incorporating my opinion was a new experience for me. Also, the seriousness of my topic made the transition more difficult because the tone was very serious and respectful. To overcome this obstacle, I attempted to use bold claims and vivid language while still establishing a knowledgeable and respected tone. This can be seen when describing the wide range of experiments as, “immersing subjects in freezing ice water for hours on end to record the detrimental effects of exposure, to injecting the female prisoners’ uteruses with corrosive substances to find new sterilization
All of my previous writing experience has involved academic writing, so incorporating my opinion was a new experience for me. Also, the seriousness of my topic made the transition more difficult because the tone was very serious and respectful. To overcome this obstacle, I attempted to use bold claims and vivid language while still establishing a knowledgeable and respected tone. This can be seen when describing the wide range of experiments as, “immersing subjects in freezing ice water for hours on end to record the detrimental effects of exposure, to injecting the female prisoners’ uteruses with corrosive substances to find new sterilization