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My Writing Monster: Personal Narrative
Writing has never been my strong point. When looking back at my old papers, most of my errors were, punctuation and weak responses. My writing monster of comma splice, is a lot like my personal monster of time management. Trying to remember to separate independent clauses and my time has been very difficult for me this semester.
My personal monster, is not being able to manage my time effectively. Between home, work and school, I feel there isn’t enough hours in one day to get everything done. My first semester, I was able to get some of my homework done on my lunch breaks. Now I’m working through my lunch break, to get my work at work done. By the time I get home, finish dinner, get my son to bed, I’m too exhausted to start/finish my homework


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