The first stylistic element that Hemingway uses to show Santiago's emotions for the fish is diction. Hemingway accomplishes this through the use of opposite words. "Aren't they lovely? Eat them good now and then there is the tuna. Hard …show more content…
Tone, overall, is the most important element due to the fact that it effects how the reader perceives the passage. "Come up easy and let me put the harpoon in you. All right. Are you ready? Have you been long enough at table?" (pg 44) The words used in the previous quote clearly display Hemingway's fluctuating tone. As Santiago's anxiety increases for the fish so do the words that Hemingway chooses. After Santiago kills the fish Hemingway brings the tone down to a calm and subtle level. "Then he began to pity the great fish that he had hooked. He is wonderful and strange and who knows how old he is, he thought. Never have I had such a strong fish nor one who acted so strangely." (pg 48) This is an example of the transition from the anxiety that Santiago once felt to the sympathy that he now feels for the fish. The reason for Santiago's sympathy for the fish is because as he struggles to catch the fish so did the fish to free itself. Hemingway does this in order to let his audience know that Santiago desires and respects this fish yet he must conquer it. Conquering the fish not only fulfills Santiago's aim, but tore away his dignity and what is left of his