You have the freedom to choose, but that doesn’t make you immune to being judged for your choices. It means the government can’t step in and punish you….or so we thought. In this collection we were introduced and freedom and how should it be given or demanded. We read many stories on different ways freedom was given or demanded. Even though some freedoms should be demanded there are a lot that should be given to us to feel safe in our own country.
Thesis Statement: Certain freedoms must be given and not demanded.
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1.First Point (topic sentence) In certain life situations people are mistaken of being a mental or having an illness because of their preferences or the way they act.
(evidence 1): In, “The Pedestrian” by Ray Bradbury, Mr.Mead was taken …show more content…
Most of time their are laws or rules that people aren’t allowed to look but sometimes they take force and look. A.(evidence 1) In “The Censors” by Luisa Valenzuela, privacy was limited. Government made a law that when you send a letter it must be censored. The people of Argentina couldn’t send a letter to their families without it being censored and often all the important stuff was censored. Some of these people’s letters were personal and shouldn’t been seen by others but by law they had to get rid of some privacy and share personal things to to others.
B. (evidence 2) A couple months ago there was a article on a police officer arresting a woman. Many thought she was a bad nurse because she wouldn't do want the officer wanted her to do but many don't know that whole story. The officer asked for medical paper of a patient but the nurse couldn't because if hospital rules. The officer kept trying but the nurse followed the rules and the the officer took force and arrested quite harshly even though she was protecting the patient's personal