Personal Narrative Essay
A). The emergency: (5 points)
During this pass September of 2016, a traumatic event unfold before my very eyes. I was visiting my aunt’s house because I feel home sick. Honestly, I feel like family sick; my aunt is like another mother to me. I spent the weekend there in North Miami, and I just finished saying my goodbyes to my cousin. As I am walking down the street to the bus stop, I was digging through my pocket for my headphones. An accident happened right in front of my house. Two cars going the opposite direction end up in front of my house. The accident caused one of the cars turned to fast, instead of waiting, and hit the other car directly. The speed of the collision cause the car flip over one side; the other car block the two way and was damaged in the front. My cousin ran out the house to see if I was okay. The accident happened literally two minutes after I walked out the house. People from around the neighborhood began surround the flipped car. A lady from the other began to screaming because the other person in flipped car was trapped. …show more content…
Step One: noticing (6 points):
When the female driver step out the car and started screaming, I realized this was serious. For the basis of ease, the flipped car was a black truck and the other was a gray truck. The driver of black truck was knocked out and the passenger was crying. In addition, the neighbors were making the female driver of the gray truck confused. They were only making the situation worst by say mean and derogatory things for her mistake. All of this with bit car debris and glass made me notice that someone had to fix this
During this pass September of 2016, a traumatic event unfold before my very eyes. I was visiting my aunt’s house because I feel home sick. Honestly, I feel like family sick; my aunt is like another mother to me. I spent the weekend there in North Miami, and I just finished saying my goodbyes to my cousin. As I am walking down the street to the bus stop, I was digging through my pocket for my headphones. An accident happened right in front of my house. Two cars going the opposite direction end up in front of my house. The accident caused one of the cars turned to fast, instead of waiting, and hit the other car directly. The speed of the collision cause the car flip over one side; the other car block the two way and was damaged in the front. My cousin ran out the house to see if I was okay. The accident happened literally two minutes after I walked out the house. People from around the neighborhood began surround the flipped car. A lady from the other began to screaming because the other person in flipped car was trapped. …show more content…
Step One: noticing (6 points):
When the female driver step out the car and started screaming, I realized this was serious. For the basis of ease, the flipped car was a black truck and the other was a gray truck. The driver of black truck was knocked out and the passenger was crying. In addition, the neighbors were making the female driver of the gray truck confused. They were only making the situation worst by say mean and derogatory things for her mistake. All of this with bit car debris and glass made me notice that someone had to fix this