Personal Narrative Essay: Ice Fishing

Ice Fishing
On top of my clothes, I pot on my winter gear and get ice fishing things.
In the winter by the street, I get in my car. past a gas station towards the west, I drive to the store.
In the store past the hunting things, I get fishing bait and tackle. after getting gas in a town I drive to the river.
On the ice under the brig, I unpack my things.
On the ice near the tree, I find a spot.
Over rock on the ice, I set up tip ups. by my tip ups between to trees, I drill ice fishing holes
In front my tip ups over my ice fishing holes, I set up tent.
At 10:00 am during snowfall, I start fishing