Preview

Personal Narrative: How Swimming Changed My Life

Good Essays
Open Document
Open Document
468 Words
Grammar
Grammar
Plagiarism
Plagiarism
Writing
Writing
Score
Score
Personal Narrative: How Swimming Changed My Life
“Take your marks. GO!” I leap from the starting blocks and into the chilling water holding a streamline until I begin my underwater pullout. As the race continues I push myself harder and harder as I begin to fatigue until I finish. Looking up at the clock I think to myself, I need to go faster, I can go faster, I will go faster. I hop out of the water and take my spot in line behind my teammates, preparing for the second of six 100 yard breaststroke sprints from the blocks. From each team, BGSC to PAA to LOSC I have forged friendships and emotional bonds with my teammates found almost nowhere else in my life; which is bound to happen after training, competing, talking, laughing, and spending twenty plus hours a week with each other, The only …show more content…
Before joining my first swim club team in 2013 my physical activity was low to say the least, but competitive swimming turned that around completely. My training began with eight hours a week, but by the end of the year it would increase to twenty or more, depending on whether or not we were tapering or had a meet that week. The intense training regimen I was placed on was a great outlet for stress and a new avenue for personal growth. Swimming taught me commitment and how to set, prepare for, and achieve my goals in and out of the water. Being part of a competitive team as well as training as an athlete improved every aspect of my life; social, physical, intellectual, and emotional. At each team I have trained with, there have always been coaches that help me grow as a person and a swimmer. Each of my coaches created an environment that caused my love for swimming to grow, something which I did not think was possible. They have always been there when I needed help with my stroke, or when I was upset over a bad swim. From setting goals for the season to working on my stroke my coaches are always there to push me in and out of the

You May Also Find These Documents Helpful

  • Good Essays

    Through my high-school rowing career, it was my goal to win first place in at-least one competition, whether it be in a boat with four people, or a boat with eight people. Shortly after I was added to the team, I switched places with the stroke seat in my boat due to my determination and hard efforts. Stroke seat sets the rhythm for the rest of the rowers, and as I quickly improved to be the most powerful and technical rower in my quad boat, I was to be the metronome. That year, we won most of our competitions. For the following rowing seasons, I was set as stroke seat in many of the boats I had competed in. I continued to improve my technique and speed in the boat, and became one of the most reliable stroke seat members in my school's entire…

    • 198 Words
    • 1 Page
    Good Essays
  • Satisfactory Essays

    Have you ever felt the need to improve your life? I joined the cross country team in sixth grade to do just that. Cross country requires tremendous amounts of hard work, dedication, and never giving up to succeed in.…

    • 313 Words
    • 2 Pages
    Satisfactory Essays
  • Satisfactory Essays

    To express his believe about stretching one’s limit, the great Guy Finley had once stated, “The limit of your present understanding is not the limit of your possibilities.” Inspired by his quote, I, Giang Pham, believe that I would be a valuable member of McGarvin’s Academic Pentathlon team. Based on my personal knowledge of Pentathlon, I have first-handedly experience the soul of a Pentathlete through various study sessions at Ethan Allen. Because of this, I have developed a deep insight of the components necessary to be a true Pentathlete. In addition to having first-hand experience, I also have extremely high expectations for both myself and other students, for it is essential in my academic growth. With this, one like myself could ultimately…

    • 196 Words
    • 1 Page
    Satisfactory Essays
  • Good Essays

    To this day I compete in my high school swim team, and yet I can’t seem to forget tryouts. All I remember is that I wasn’t sure of just how good I needed to be, so I spent five hours a day in the pool, burning my back just to make sure that I had done everything I could. That is to say that I see myself as a highly competitive individual, and I also have seen myself limited by my financial background. Maybe I couldn’t compete in the swim club, or maybe I couldn’t go to the FCCLA (a club) national competition this year because the trip to California was too expensive, but if something I am sure of, is that if I could, I would have. Now, surely I am unique, as it is technically impossible for someone to be exactly like anyone else, and what separates me from the rest, I think, is my tenacity, my need to grow. As a young child, I was constantly compared with to my older brother. He had good grades, he was smart. Being the youngest in probably most situations (I started school early) I was never heard, I was to follow examples, but I wanted to be the example. I want to be great, and I will be regardless of what challenges I have to face, or what barriers people put in front of me, I will be…

    • 650 Words
    • 3 Pages
    Good Essays
  • Satisfactory Essays

    I started wrestling in in high school when I was a junior at the age of sixteen. I got in to wrestling when I left boxing. I wanted to peruse a new sport in my high school. Wrestling had changed my life from being a person that was always in short temper verses a person that would always respect his opponent. Wrestling to some was just a sport but to me it was my passion. A major change in my life was to wrestle after a fibula bone fracture. Because I had lost my position due to a injury.…

    • 99 Words
    • 1 Page
    Satisfactory Essays
  • Good Essays

    While performing a front three and a half dive off a ten meter platform, I lost track of my position and boom my head hit the water in mid rotation. The failed dive resulted in me coming up from the water not being able to hear from one ear. The impact was so severe that I ruptured my eardrum. The injury was one thing but tears rolled down my cheeks after the doctor stated that I could not dive for several weeks.…

    • 679 Words
    • 3 Pages
    Good Essays
  • Powerful Essays

    It was the finals of the 2004 swimming state championships. I was seated second in the 100-yard individual breaststroke. My heart was pounding as I swam my warm up laps. I would have to drop about a second or so to have any shot at the title and the gold. I hopped out of the warm up pool, and headed over to grab my towel and work out a strategy plan with my coach. The first order of business was to address the main problem. I needed to win. My coach had gathered information on my competition. We knew her best personal times, the way she trained, and how much she had rested for this meet. From all of this info being hurriedly spoken to in my ear, as I made my way to the blocks, enabled me to make the guess that if I made my move on the middle of the third lap, I would have a chance of winning. It was settled. I would hang on my competitor’s hip till about 75% through the race, then make my move. It was time to race. I took a deep breath, pressed my hands firmly to my goggles, and before I knew it, I was off. First turn, then the second, it was now time to make my move. I gave it all that I had, banked off of the last turn, and headed home for the win. I hit the wall and turned my head, I had done it! First place was mine. I had overcome the problem, and had come out victorious. This problem, which in turn happened to turn out great, nonetheless can easily be compared to the scientific method.…

    • 1231 Words
    • 5 Pages
    Powerful Essays
  • Good Essays

    In the summer going into freshman year, my grandpa said to me he expected a state ring. I told him that was impossible. A freshman doesn’t get a varsity spot, especially with as much talent the upperclassmen have. Little did I know that anything is possible when I put my mind to it.…

    • 317 Words
    • 2 Pages
    Good Essays
  • Good Essays

    It first started out as a walk around the neighborhood, I had a lot of stress and tension built up inside of me and felt as if I was about to explode. My walking pace slowly started to increase to a jog then to a run. My mind slowly starting to become clear blank slate and I ran without any destination. Since I haven’t been jogging regularly at that time my body was exhausted, screaming for me to stop. However, my mind kept pushing my body to keep running letting me forget about all the pain. My feet were pounding against the pavement as I hear my breath streaming out of my lungs and throat rushing back in to deliver nourishing oxygen. My legs are rotating effortlessly as they move faster and faster as their movements have become an unconscious act. After the run, my physical state was exhausted and limp but my mind became a white canvas making a new start. Now whenever I feel stressed or have any upcoming anxious events, such as final…

    • 433 Words
    • 2 Pages
    Good Essays
  • Good Essays

    Race-Personal Narrative

    • 658 Words
    • 3 Pages

    I was sitting outside the pool door on a cold winter day waiting for my mom to pick me up from practice when my coach walked around the corner with a grin on his face. He sat down next to me and let out a huge sigh. He explained to tell me that he really needed me to swim a long distance race at the meet next month. I felt my heart sink to the bottom of my chest. I knew if I was going to swim this race I would have to train really hard for the next month. I didn’t want to let my team down and I knew I was the only person who could take this on. My coached agreed to train me and teach me how to do well in a long race. The next day at practice I tried the hardest I have ever tried. My coach had me work on my endurance and try to get faster times. I practiced for a month long, but I still wasn’t sure I could get the time I wanted to get or the time my coach wanted me to get. When I woke up the morning of the meet all I could think about was that race. I got up on the starting block, and I felt confident and ready. I heard the start buzzer go off and I…

    • 658 Words
    • 3 Pages
    Good Essays
  • Good Essays

    When something changes a person’s life they will remember it forever. It doesn’t matter how big or how small it is, it will leave a permanent imprint on that person’s memory. The saddest thing about that imprint staying in a person’s memory is that it could have either changed their life in a positive or negative way. In the last year, three major events have helped change and shape my life in a positive way. These three events have completely changed my life and have made me a better person overall and will always leave a good imprint in my memory.…

    • 784 Words
    • 4 Pages
    Good Essays
  • Good Essays

    “A coach is someone who tells you what you don’t want to hear, who has you see what you don’t want to see, so you can be who you have always known you could be” (Tom Landry). In order for athletes to achieve their highest goal, they need to have an effective coach who will help them become the best athlete they can be. An effective coach will be successful while working to achieve the goals they intended. A powerful coach takes their love for the sport and puts it into their athletes. Athletes will progress immensely from what they learn from their coach. Coaching is such an influential position in an athlete's life, so there are certain attributes and concepts they must know and employ to be successful.…

    • 1905 Words
    • 8 Pages
    Good Essays
  • Good Essays

    Njk;; L'Njnlk

    • 455 Words
    • 2 Pages

    Coming into high school I wanted to get involved somehow, but I didn’t know where I would fit. Swimming was a sport I was always interested in, but never took the initiative to join a team. After constant nagging from my father about the importance of participating in a sport in high school, I decided to join the swim team. Going out the first day I didn’t know what to expect. After the first day I felt like Jell-O. I quickly realized that swim training would be one of the hardest tasks put before me. Getting through the first season was a challenge, because it was my first time doing a sport in high school and time was something I had very little of. Managing school and about seven practices a week was a struggle, but I quickly found a system that worked for me. Getting through the first season was a struggle. I not only finished, I finished proudly with a varsity letter and the “most improved” award.…

    • 455 Words
    • 2 Pages
    Good Essays
  • Satisfactory Essays

    beginnings

    • 562 Words
    • 2 Pages

    The first team I ever joined the YMCA cancelled the entire swimming team program. I had a choice put in front of me: stop sports all together, Join ODAC, or find another mediocre swim team. I chose to join ODAC; ODAC stands for Old Dominion Aquatic Club. Once I joined ODAC I began to practice more and more. I spent more and more and more energy on practices and I could feel myself getting better, so it was equivalent to a new beginning in my eyes. I was more prepared to race on a higher level and I wanted to.…

    • 562 Words
    • 2 Pages
    Satisfactory Essays
  • Good Essays

    I have a rather diverse athletic background; before I even thought of swimming to be my sport, I grew up as a football and baseball player. Winning tournaments, receiving trophies with my team mates , and earning medals was part of my childhood. It wasn't until highschool that I became a swimmer, and I walked onto the varsity team after the coach described my stroke as natural and the swimmers joked that I was a prodigy. We won state that year and the following year. Being a part of that inspired me to work harder than I ever imagined possible.…

    • 727 Words
    • 3 Pages
    Good Essays