The overall message of my story is that one should try their best to succeed, but not to the point when it becomes unsafe.
I can be descriptive and use specific word choice that would depict the emotions I felt throughout the time of my story. Words such as exhausted and heartbroken can be examples of such words.
While telling my story to the audience, I will attempt to alter the volume of my voice depending on the scenario, rather than keeping it monotone. At happy moments, my voice would get louder, while during