Personal Narrative: My Final Memoir

I was inspired to choose this topic because moving was a very important part of my life, it had changed me as a person. During the writing process I had struggled with showing not telling. Often times I would write things like “This had taught me that….”. After peer conferencing and revising, I had transformed my memoir so it’s more polished and professional. I really benefitted from the advice from my revisers. One of the suggestions that I was given is that I should add more inner thoughts, this had helped me add more emotion to my story and make my story more heartfelt and personal.
I feel proud about this memoir, this is because I worked very hard on my final memoir and think I did my best to perfect it. After working on my memoir I feel