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Personal Narrative: My Life Changing Time
Along the way I did make many changes since I did it last minute I had to think fast of what I was going to do and how I was going to do it. In the beginning I had different pictures and ended up changing them at the end. I added my survey on the website instead of writing it down. In the beginning I felt I didn’t have pathos and had to think of a way to change that so I added a new page which was aborted babies which is a slide show of babies being aborted but end up surviving from harsh chemicals, these babies are left to die. I also added a sign up page for mothers in need which wasn't and idea I was going to put until I thought of it last

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