I also could have used a different word choice at this time. In this paragraph, I did have excellent sentence combinations and powerful and emotional details, as the reader may have felt they were living in the moment. In my future papers, I hope to better myself in the correct usage of commas and grammatical errors to manufacture myself to sound more educated. In the next paragraph of my essay, I need to be careful with wording, such as ‘thing(s)’. Also, I had some issue with listing people, putting myself first instead of last. At the end of the paragraph, I did have some strong moments …show more content…
For future papers, I plan to use peer editing and the use of paperrater.com. Throughout my writing, I had a significant amount of issues with the usage of commas and not having them in the correct place. To further better papers, I plan to use The Little, Brown Compact Handbook for assistance with commas. I find the use of the book helpful for any paper. The handbook has an abounding amount of great tips to help with various types of writing. Another resource I plan to use is Writing: A guide for College and Beyond by Lester Faigley. In this book, there are various chapters that hopefully will help with upcoming papers, such as the observation paper and the position paper. I hope to use these resources to the best of my abilities and better my grades on future