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Personal Narrative-The Ardeche: Caving
The Ardeche: Caving

"Oh god no!" I shouted as I hit my head on the stalactite and slipped on the mud. My head hurt a little, but luckily I was wearing a helmet, so I was fine. I got up, trying to keep my balance, and carried on crawling through the cave, my body full of sticky, slimy mud.

So, you probably don't understand what is happening, so let me explain...

..3 hours earlier...

The sun was shining through my tent's window at the Ardeche. I could hear the birds chirping, and there wasn't a cloud in the sky. It was a school trip, and today, we were going caving. I met up with my group, and we prepared our caving equipment, and we were briefed about secuirity. We had torn, dirty second-hand waterproof overalls, Helmets and Head
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