ESWL 1300 Writing
Fall 2014
Prof. Kwok
Every time refer to beauty, Notre Dame De Paris comes into my mind. Esmeralda and Quasimodo are good examples of physical beauty and inner beauty. Both of them are lucky because they have at least one of the characteristics. In my opinion, either physical beauty or inner beauty is significant.
Like the majority of people, I am usually attracted by fashion beauty when walking on street. As we can see, physical beauty can be easily recognized. Many people could make a living by virtue of it. There are several grand fashion shows in New York every year, a variety of super models will converge in Manhattan during that time. Another good example is Victoria’s Secret, the company hire many beautiful girls to work for the advertisement. The appearance is more and more important especially in career field. Many managers consider a man is unable to do the work well if he can not deal with his dressing, so they prefer the good-looking and neat employees. In accordance with the survey, the group of charming and attractive lawyers’ income is 14% higher than their colleagues who are not so good-looking. So it is obvious that physical beauty is quite useful and important.
This is how I consider about physical beauty; however, as I said, inner beauty is also significant.
Unlike physical beauty, inner beauty is hardly recognized. Excellent characteristics are not only attractive appearance such as dressing and hairstyle, but also the inner beauty such as confidence, patience and honesty. These qualities may not be recognized in a short time, but only if they are accepted, it is really helpful to strengthen the relationship with others. Think about the artists or politicians with disability, they’ve made great contributions to the world. Even though they have no physical beauty, they are widely respected by people just because of their inner beauty.
In accordance with the morality of the culture in my country, I can