Quiz 11: Fill In The Missing Words
Quiz 11
Fill in the missing words: At this stage, Gene has enough details to write the initial draft of his paper. Notice that he continues to accumulate specific supporting details as he writes the draft. For example, he crosses out and replaces “long hours” with the more specific sixty hours; he crosses out and replaces “short breaks” with the more specific two ten-minute breaks and unpaid lunch. He also works to improve some of his sentences (for instance, he writes three different versions of each carton contained twelve thirty-two-ounce cans or bottles or apple juice, and they were heavy sentence in the paragraph). In addition, he crosses out and eliminates a sentence about a mental count of all the cartons because he realizes it does
Fill in the missing words: At this stage, Gene has enough details to write the initial draft of his paper. Notice that he continues to accumulate specific supporting details as he writes the draft. For example, he crosses out and replaces “long hours” with the more specific sixty hours; he crosses out and replaces “short breaks” with the more specific two ten-minute breaks and unpaid lunch. He also works to improve some of his sentences (for instance, he writes three different versions of each carton contained twelve thirty-two-ounce cans or bottles or apple juice, and they were heavy sentence in the paragraph). In addition, he crosses out and eliminates a sentence about a mental count of all the cartons because he realizes it does