Reflection On My Rhetoric

Rhetoric is an aspect that everyone must take into account at all times, especially when creating a piece of work. As, the amount of effort that one puts into crafting the rhetoric they wish to convey in their work, the better that work and message will appeal to the intended audience. Just as I talked about in my rhetorical analysis paper reflection, one of the most important aspects of rhetoric is the rhetorical triangle; the rhetorical triangle being encompassed of ethos, logos, and pathos.
This notion was extremely important to me when creating my rhetoric in practice project, as I wanted to make sure I was adequately forming my rhetoric correctly and that all three complimented each other. I also found it a necessary point to focus on
Since I was working with a yonkoma, I had to think a lot about how I will convey my ethos, pathos, and logos differently. This is due to the work being primarily visual base with little text that is removed from the author. This is why I had to rely on creating an appropriate ethos for my characters rather than myself. I did this by having attempting to have the boy seem as undesirable and dislikable as possible while giving him Carpe diem type dialogue in order create a negative association between the two. One of the prospects about the boy that I unfortunately forgot to bring notice to in my rhetoric in practice paper was that he was smoking all throughout the yonkoma. The nature of him smoking was a deliberate attempt to make him seem untrustworthy or un-credible; yet I never bring up this point in both my paper and the yonkoma itself. Though the readers of my yonkoma could probably still get the message, I wish I would have added some sort of effect due to the smoking. Such as coughing from either person or have the girl make an offhand comment about it. I feel as if this would have really affected the rhetoric of both my yonkoma and my paper in making it more impactful or