As each generation passes and new discoveries are being made, some inventions or ideas are being redefined. [← Consider adding the term “and” in between “passes” and “new”. This would complete the introductory phrase “As each generation passes and new discoveries are being made”.] Our lives have always been better than the ones of our ancestors and most of the time we learned to not make the same mistakes or to follow the same ideas that are no longer valid in today’s day and age. This translates to medicine as well. [← This currently appears as a fragment. You can connect it to the sentence before it but I can also recommend simply changing “which” into “this”. Using “this” would turn the fragment into a complete sentence. …show more content…
[← In here, you could either say “we all look towards the future” or “we are all looking towards the future”. Saying “we all looking” leaves a verb usage issue that makes your point unclear.] And as students who have passed their MCAT and fulfilled their requirements to enter their professional careers as a fully pledge medical expert in their position as a brain surgeon, medical engineer, pediatrician, or any other specialized physician. They will be entering their new workplace as newly minted learners. Since the experiences of students who chose to enter medical careers no longer are bound by US procedures, some are pushed to go outside the country and to look for other types of practices. To understand the gifts of these physicians and what they use to tend to the illness on the people who come to them. It’s a humbling experience of course but, these students are pushed for they can implement what they have learned and to see that modern medicine isn’t the only way someone can heal. In my interview, he stated, “during my time in the islands, I learned about other versions of medicine and the different oils/ and type of native plant they used to help a common cold. Where my preference towards traditional medicine is change the