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Said Tanner: A Fictional Narrative
“It was a very cheerful day on September 28th, 1893 until my wife Julia drowned at the mill, she’s been gone for 1 year tomorrow.” Said Tanner. “Whoah do you know who did it?” Said Joseph. “Sadly… No.” Said Tanner. “Oh ok I guess I’ll go.” Said Joseph.
“Joseph did you tell him I did it when you talked to Tanner the other day? I was hiding in the bushes and I couldn’t hear.” Said John. “No but I think it’s time to tell him I’m getting mad and now I heard the real story because you didn’t tell me the real story. Said Joseph. “If you tell him I will frame you for bank robbery and you won’t be seen ever again!” Said John. “No don’t please don’t!” Said Joseph. “Than don’t tell him now just go.” Said John. “Ok fine” Said Joseph.
Joseph went to the mill to work with Tanner and they stayed there for 4 days straight because a terrible storm hit them. They were sleeping and all of the sudden 2 ghosts were running around and laughing. “isn’t that the owner’s two daughters that drowned in the river?!” Said Tanner. “It couldn’t be them, they aren’t alive anymore. Joseph said Scaredly. “Well it is so how can this be?” Said Tanner. “What is that one doing? Is she trying to hide in that pile of
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“are you serious?” Joseph Said. “Yeah but he got electrocuted and died.” Tanner sadly said. Tanner didn’t really want him to die, but he also thought what goes around comes around. “Did you know Julia always said I worked too much and that someday I’m going to die there, but she was correct that someone was going to die, thankfully it wasn’t me!” Tanner Said. “You should retire for your wife Julia because I don’t think Julia will like it if you work” Joseph Said. then they heard the faint words of “Get out of here” they thought it was the owner’s daughters at first but it really was John! John wasn’t always mean he used to be my best friend when I was 14 and I remember that year we graduated that was a fun

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