Samurai Women
ENL101 English Composition I
Class Assignment 2 (10%)
Date Distributed: OCTOBER 31, 2014
Instructions
1. Provide your assignment with the INTI cover page.
2. Do not plagiarize your project.
3. Hand in your assignment latest by NOVEMBER 12, 2014
4. Late submission will be penalized.
Note the underlined sentences in the passage. Those are the ones you need to edit. Make sure the sentences are corrected in terms of grammar, precision in meaning and sentence structure according to the context.
The samurai were people who go for wars, or soldiers that are not afraid, who became powerful in Japan around the 1200s. The samurai, which means “those who serve,” were hired by lords to fight their wars and protect their land. The samurai were expert fighters; they were skilled with the sword and bow and arrow, and they were superior horsemen. They were athletic and strong, and they developed their fighting skills into what is the basis of modern martial arts.
The samurai had a code of morals called Bushido, which meant “warrior way.” The samurai had to have loyalty that couldn’t be asked to the emperor and their lord (the daimyo). They were trustworthy, honest, kind and generous to the poor. They led fugal lives and had no interest in rich stuffs or materialistic. They were only interested in onor and price. Additionally, they had to be men of noble spirit who were not scared to dies, because death in battle only meant honor to their lord and family. If samurai lost a battle or a fight, they would have to kill themselves rather than face dishonor.
The samurai developed a special way of dressing. They wore their hair tied back in a top-knot, and their brow and crown were shaved. Samurai wore simple clothes when they were not fighting. However, when they were fighting, they wore a suit that is hard and can protect that was made from leather or iron strips, so it was completely move here and there easily. Their most important weapon and sign of their class was
Class Assignment 2 (10%)
Date Distributed: OCTOBER 31, 2014
Instructions
1. Provide your assignment with the INTI cover page.
2. Do not plagiarize your project.
3. Hand in your assignment latest by NOVEMBER 12, 2014
4. Late submission will be penalized.
Note the underlined sentences in the passage. Those are the ones you need to edit. Make sure the sentences are corrected in terms of grammar, precision in meaning and sentence structure according to the context.
The samurai were people who go for wars, or soldiers that are not afraid, who became powerful in Japan around the 1200s. The samurai, which means “those who serve,” were hired by lords to fight their wars and protect their land. The samurai were expert fighters; they were skilled with the sword and bow and arrow, and they were superior horsemen. They were athletic and strong, and they developed their fighting skills into what is the basis of modern martial arts.
The samurai had a code of morals called Bushido, which meant “warrior way.” The samurai had to have loyalty that couldn’t be asked to the emperor and their lord (the daimyo). They were trustworthy, honest, kind and generous to the poor. They led fugal lives and had no interest in rich stuffs or materialistic. They were only interested in onor and price. Additionally, they had to be men of noble spirit who were not scared to dies, because death in battle only meant honor to their lord and family. If samurai lost a battle or a fight, they would have to kill themselves rather than face dishonor.
The samurai developed a special way of dressing. They wore their hair tied back in a top-knot, and their brow and crown were shaved. Samurai wore simple clothes when they were not fighting. However, when they were fighting, they wore a suit that is hard and can protect that was made from leather or iron strips, so it was completely move here and there easily. Their most important weapon and sign of their class was