up the example of Alaskan Representative Don Young who sponsored a bill that removes polar bears from the endangered species list because his top donor lobbied the bill. The article’s biggest strength is its use of statistics to back up its claims. The article provides numbers showing that the amount of campaign spending has been increasing since 1998, information on the amount of money donated by different sectors, and the amount of money spent by PACs. One of the article’s weaknesses is that it gives very little attention to the corruption that campaign donations create. The influence of money on politicians was only covered in a single section of the article. Within that section only a single example of corruption was given. Another one of the article’s negatives is that it’s ending. Kromholz changes from an article that is evidence based into opinion piece in the concluding section. Her ending statements are not backed up by any evidence and exist as a message for the reader.
up the example of Alaskan Representative Don Young who sponsored a bill that removes polar bears from the endangered species list because his top donor lobbied the bill. The article’s biggest strength is its use of statistics to back up its claims. The article provides numbers showing that the amount of campaign spending has been increasing since 1998, information on the amount of money donated by different sectors, and the amount of money spent by PACs. One of the article’s weaknesses is that it gives very little attention to the corruption that campaign donations create. The influence of money on politicians was only covered in a single section of the article. Within that section only a single example of corruption was given. Another one of the article’s negatives is that it’s ending. Kromholz changes from an article that is evidence based into opinion piece in the concluding section. Her ending statements are not backed up by any evidence and exist as a message for the reader.