If admitted, I intend to pursue the Ph.D. in Curriculum and Instruction on a parttime basis (at least initially) and thus would not be eligible for a Graduate Assistantship.
Initial paragraph about full- or parttime intentions. The first sentence clearly summarizes the purpose for pursuing a doctorate – an important piece of the overall statement. Note that later in the document this is explained with more specificity; a strong statement does not leave purposes and goals in vague terms only. Note too that the statement includes interests in teaching, research and service to the profession - all important roles for a Ph.D. in an academic job. Other career aspirations may have different emphases. Evidence-based (citations of work he is familiar with) argument for one of his central interests in research (disconnect between research and teachers in classrooms).
My ultimate goal is to complete my doctorate so that I can teach future teachers, conduct research within the classroom, and make a contribution to the improvement of mathematics education. Over the past fifteen years, my journey towards this goal has been circuitous at best. It has carried me through many schools and multiple states, presenting opportunities to work within every grade from kindergarten to college. My compass has guided me to discover methods to
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