Even though using long words, complex sentences, or metaphors could make the writing better for some audience. However, a large number of audience would prefer a simple or graphical writing which would help them to understand complex ideas in shorter time.…
The book by Joseph M. Williams in style: Ten lessons in clarity and Grace he generally tackles on writing as a verb. He clearly expounds on the most effectual and competent styles vis-à-vis writing as a verb. ‘Concision’ is the title of lesson seven where William explains how important it is to shorten a sentence so that a reader can clearly understand it. He explains one should not only know how to control the flow of ideas but they should be able to be brief. The causes of wordiness have also been explained in the book. This wordiness in a sentence or redundancy is tackled by the five principles of concision that make a sentence to be precise and attractive to the reader.…
1) Clutter is the disease of American writing according to Zinsser. He believes we can free ourselves of clutter by clear thinking becomes clear writing; one can't exist without the other. It's impossible for a muddy thinker to write good English.…
In the article “Unteaching the Five-Paragraph Essay”, Marie Foley argues that the five-paragraph formula restrains students from actively thinking. The five-paragraph structure is still used today because teachers are continuing to teach students the formula. The formula is said to be easier to teach to a class rather than to teach individual students different patterns of organization. Foley says that the formula being taught is easier on them to teach and to grade because of how crowded the English classes are. The formula contradicts most instructor’s basic goals because it is “depriving [students] of the pleasure of discovering new ideas”. Foley points out three reasons to end the formula. One being that it deters discovery. She states that students become too dependent on this structure once they have mastered it which makes it difficult to change writing styles. The structure “invites students to fill the five slots with what they already know” which prevents them from coming up with new ideas and exploring their minds. Foley also points out that the formula suppresses authenticity of the writer. Although the student goes through the motions of writing, “they seldom create something authentically theirs.” Students freely express themselves in writings such as personal letters and journals, but creates another title for themselves when writing an essay. Foley states that the five paragraph formula fails to portray the writer’s personality and is also unnatural in many ways. The structure is not used by professional writers because it weakens coherence, which is one of the most basic writing needs. It “limits students to a superficial, predictable level of coherence.” Foley argues that the formula hurts students rather than help them. It deprives them of the pleasure of writing and will not prepare them for academic and real world writing.…
Writing needn't be stressful or feared if they follow the four steps, Plan, Draft, Revise, and edit. Writing will become easier and faster.…
William Zinsser has advice for writing memoirs. “Be yourself”, “speak freely”, and “tell your own story” (Zinsser, 2, 4, 6). It applies to many different memoirs.…
The seven-step process of writing that the book uses in its approach to teach eager-minded students to make their writing more effective starts with prewriting. This refers to strategies you can use to generate ideas before you actually begin writing. This step identifies with Dietsch’s “an idea becomes an effective essay”. During this stage, you are delving deep within your mind to identify how you will form an effective work. The second and third stages are identifying the thesis, and then supporting said thesis with evidence. Without evidence, the thesis will maintain no credibility, and will simply be an abstract idea with no structural backup. Dietsch touches on this by saying, “develops as the writer rethinks”. The writer must rethink their thesis and the evidence they…
There are many essays throughout the text of Writing About Writing, which discuss writing in a particular way. In chapter two, Maria P. Rey writes a letter to her high school criticizing their teaching strategies. The rules her previous professors had restricted her with often times caused writers block. Mike Rose, a student at the University of California, found that “ students who experienced blocking were all operating either with writing rules or… strategies that impeded rather than enhanced the composing process” (272). Rose’s research supports the dilemma of Maria’s writers block. Students do not intentionally produce poor papers. Rather it is the stress they experience along with…
1. A paragraph shall be composed consisting of words with jumbled text. The first and last letters of words shall be in correct place and all in between letters of words being jumbled.…
Secondly, a piece of text comes with certain form, different aspects such as the setting, perspective etc. all in order to generate meaning. Without elements as such it is hard to for the reader to get an understanding of the meaning of a text. If these different aspects/forms were not used it’s like missing an important ingredient to a recipe. The purpose of the text will be unsuccessful without it being able to generate a meaning. If purpose and form…
“Writing is easy. All you do is stare at a blank sheet of paper until drops of blood form on your forehead.”…
The principal lesson Zinsser is trying to teach is to keep your writing simple and keep an eye out for clutter. Zinsser goes on to explain how “clutter is the disease of American writing,” due to the desire to add purposeless words or phrases used to make someone’s writing sound more professional and significant.…
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Throughout A Tale of Two Cities Dickens illuminates Doctor Manette's identity by effectively using a good variety of literary devices. For Doctor Manette's character, Dickens specifically uses foreshadowing, similes, and symbolism to portray an accurate and deep personality to the reader.…
Johnathon Reckford is the prime example of a good leader and educated professional. Beginning his career as a senior executive in the private sector, moving on to become executive pastor of a Presbyterian church and into his final and current role as CEO of a global religiously based non-profit organization better known as ‘Habitat for Humanity’. He explains his experiences in depth within his lecture, sharing his own personal milestones and animating the particular steps necessary to becoming a great leader.…