The principal lesson Zinsser is trying to teach is to keep your writing simple and keep an eye out for clutter. Zinsser goes on to explain how “clutter is the disease of American writing,” due to the desire to add purposeless words or phrases used to make someone’s writing sound more professional and significant.
Zinsser includes examples of clutter, “Clutter is the ponderous euphemism that turns a slum into a depressed socioeconomic area, a salesman into a marketing representative and garbage collectors into waste disposal personnel” (Zinsser 14). Zinsser has made me realize how much I use additional words and phrases that serve no purpose to my writing and can be taken out. This is an important lesson to consider while writing, since I know that while writing a formal paper, I try to sound more professional by adding sophisticated phrases and