I think this author really like to use figurative language but if you’re not actually looking for them, they are a bit hard to find.
But here are three I did manage to: 1) “In shower of dirt and shale.” I think is a metaphor because it is comparing two unlike things without using the like or as. And the words that make you think it’s a metaphor is “shower of dirt and shale”. 2) “She stood behind the lunch counter, mouth clamped like an angry snapping turtle, as the children crept fearfully past.” I think this one is a simile because it’s comparing to unlike thing using the words like or as. So I knew it was a simile because it uses the words “, mouth clamped like an angry snapping
turtle”
3) “ The woods seemed to glow in the warm afternoon light that streamed through the window” I also think this is a simile because it’s using the words “ The woods seemed to glow”. Its saying the woods are glowing so I think it’s a simile.
For this passage I have chosen where Ali finds Lucy’s diary and Ali reads Lucy’s description of Raymond Gagney. The picture I have in my mind of this man is tall, but not real tall, about the height of Miss Smith. I also picture him as plump, kind of the shape of a plumb. He also looks like he goes to the tanning salon every day, he looks kind of rubbery. He has brownish, yellowish teeth with a skinny scraggly beard. He smells like a stinky cigar or pipe, which makes me want to throw up.* This interaction with the passage helps me better understand the characters, setting and the plot, because Raymond Gagney is the main villain, the murderer, so to know what Raymond Gagney kind of looks like is a pretty key in the story.