In Anthony Horrowitz’s story he deviates away from the normal hitchhiker storyline and only reveals that he does this at the end. In the story we are lead to believe that the shady man they picked up is a vicious killer, Anthony Horrowitz’s does this by playing on our stereotypes and generalisations and backing it up with adjectives that make the hitchhiker seem sneaky and secretive when really he was just an innocent gardener and the boy (Jacob) was the one in the wrong. This type of writing is effective because it draws the writer in by tricking them into thinking they already know what is going to happen and then surprising them.
In Francis Greig’s text all the attention is on Carole and her paranoia in her situation. The hitchhiker in Francis Greig’s story makes an appearance briefly at the end of the text emphasizing Carole’s paranoia. The centre of this story revolves around Carole and her second guessing the generalisations she made creating a tense atmosphere. The fact that Carole mind at work is the centre of this story is what separates it