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The Rhyme Scheme In Hi Kenneth's Poem '
Hi Kenneth,

You made very good point with the rhyme scheme I did not notice. I was not familiar with this style of poem but it was a nice poem. I like that the author wanted his father to “not go gentle.” I did not know that this poem was about the father going blind to fight that darkness. I thought that the authors father was dying.

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