The Story Of 'Death Valaley' By Joey Akers

DEATH VALLEY by: Joey Akers
In the middle of the story, Donna , Gina , and Jenny find an abandoned campsite. Write an alternate ending to what the girls do next to survive. Use sensory details to create the tone. The campsite is filled with stuff to use but doesn't really give needs but more like wants like a mattress a pillow a shower and some water bottles which served really useful as they went to the shower and found out the electric was ran by a generator so they looked around and in their luck they found a gasoline tank. They used it and turned on the generator but it wasn't much gasoline so they had to be quick and they took all of the beer cans , water bottles and mugs and filled it all up with water and only one was able to take a
They did get a good sleep they had water but one thing was wrong they didn't have food. Waking up and all of their bellies rumbling a song out they ran in both trailers and all they could find a banana but they said ,” it food and it’s healthy for you,” chewing that banana was the hardest thing to do for them as it was expired swallowing it was like trying to swallow a mouse. They had set up camp there they had everything they needed but they would try to get rescued the food was running low and the water when they had 3 bits of food and enough water to last 2 days they said everyone spread out and look for something as they had one day so after that day was up they had to be back at the campsite or it would get bad for that person out there. Everyone made it back and only one found a place out i found a road. As they run knowing when sun hits the water they have left would last them minutes they arrive at the road yelling screaming but no one appears so they have no choice to run left or right but then Gina remembers ,” We came left when we came here and got stranded so let's go right may not be the best idea but it’s the only idea.,” They all stick with an agreement and run with all their might
Gina i think that was a little uncalled for,” Jenny said ,” ya i know but i am losing it out here i just wanna go home,” we all do even lizard lee does so maybe go up and apologize i mean he is like us he could have been stuck out here longer or shorter and we could use a extra hand to get out of here.,” Gina goes and apologizes ,” Well I gotta give it to I was kinda straight forward but i can help,” so we went down the road and kept going with lizard lee we got a little more food and water to last 2 days so we ran like there was no tomorrow. We found a car ,” STOP STOP,” all of us scream the truck coming to a stop we all got in ,”where you headed,” politely said the truck driver,” thank goodness any where we’ve been stranded out here for days or weeks.,” The truck pulls off the engine roaring. we get to a town the police take us in the emergency room ,” are dehydrated are you alright give them some water ,” helping us back into life ,”wow what a week or days or you know ,” as we leave lizard lee thanks us ,” thank you i would have never