Moving on, whereas it is important to gain the audience’s attention, as you said having a factual composition
that the reader understands is paramount. (T. Waller, personal communication, February 15, 2017). For instance, if I was preparing a lengthy paper for a middle school class utilizing intensive verbiage the probable result is that I would fail to gain their attention. Furthermore, I disagree with your premise about when writing an autobiography that the audience attention is not important. The entire point of writing an autobiography is to generate money and therefore the stories should draw the reader’s attention so that they will buy it and recommend it to their friends.
Finally, whereas factual content is important, being able to clearly and concisely establish your point to the reader is what grammar is all about. For the failure to make ourselves clear causes the reader to lose interest and then compromise the end result. Whether it be academic or an autobiographical writing the goal is capturing the audience’s attention and holding it for the duration of the paper. However, as I mentioned earlier, the continual growth you displaying in your writing is impressive so keep up the excellent effort.