Valley Forge Essay
Valley forge
When I walked into a valley forge camp I almost threw up the smell and site of the dead bodies there was at least a thousand sick people I started to walk around the camp. I saw people with almost no clothes they were also barefoot in cold weather. I heard people saying “I need meat and warm clothes under their breath”I started walking a little bit more deeper into the camp and I saw the hut so I went in right when I stepped into the hut and all I saw was smoke I didn't even see the men in the huts I went into the huts a little further in the huts and I noticed that there was no windows or chimney just a door. But what I noticed about the men that they have not quit yet even they have almost no clothes barefoot cold and have …show more content…
The third reason I would Re-enlist is because my army is fighting for our freedom and dying for are Freedom.In document A made by varied sources including Noel F. Busch winters quarts Liveright, New York, 1974; and the researchers at the William Clements Library of the University of Michigan. It says “Illness estimates During encampment is on December 23 1777 2,898 were ill of diseases on February 1, 1778 3,989 were ill of diseases.” It also says “ Death Estimate Due to Illness is December - June was 1,800 to 2,500 due to illness. This is causing me to re-enlist because these people that are sick and even died fought to keep us safe so we can have freedom and not controlled by the british.
I have decided to re-enlist for three reasons which are I am not a quitter like the rest, my soldiers need me, and fight for freedom. The key idea of my argument is that people are getting sick and even dying for our freedom. I think you should Re-enlist is because these people or dying for you and all you are going to do is just sit there and be safe. It matters today because if people don’t Re-enlist you would still be under the british control today you would have no freedom and the british can do whatever they
When I walked into a valley forge camp I almost threw up the smell and site of the dead bodies there was at least a thousand sick people I started to walk around the camp. I saw people with almost no clothes they were also barefoot in cold weather. I heard people saying “I need meat and warm clothes under their breath”I started walking a little bit more deeper into the camp and I saw the hut so I went in right when I stepped into the hut and all I saw was smoke I didn't even see the men in the huts I went into the huts a little further in the huts and I noticed that there was no windows or chimney just a door. But what I noticed about the men that they have not quit yet even they have almost no clothes barefoot cold and have …show more content…
The third reason I would Re-enlist is because my army is fighting for our freedom and dying for are Freedom.In document A made by varied sources including Noel F. Busch winters quarts Liveright, New York, 1974; and the researchers at the William Clements Library of the University of Michigan. It says “Illness estimates During encampment is on December 23 1777 2,898 were ill of diseases on February 1, 1778 3,989 were ill of diseases.” It also says “ Death Estimate Due to Illness is December - June was 1,800 to 2,500 due to illness. This is causing me to re-enlist because these people that are sick and even died fought to keep us safe so we can have freedom and not controlled by the british.
I have decided to re-enlist for three reasons which are I am not a quitter like the rest, my soldiers need me, and fight for freedom. The key idea of my argument is that people are getting sick and even dying for our freedom. I think you should Re-enlist is because these people or dying for you and all you are going to do is just sit there and be safe. It matters today because if people don’t Re-enlist you would still be under the british control today you would have no freedom and the british can do whatever they