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Rumble, rumble, rumble I heard as my heart raced, I knew I was right this time I have deep regret for coming to six flags, this wasn’t the right place, and what I’m about to tell you has to be one of, you biggest mistakes in my life that year. It was in the afternoon as I walked I notice a fun looking place on the map it was a water ride, so when we found the place myself and my mom went inside, when I saw the rides it didn’t look at all like the picture on the map,I started to think it was the wrong ride
“,Are you sure this is the right place?”I asked “Yes,“my mother replied, but necessitated to go, so as we went on the cart, it rode into pitch black room and went up, then up next we stopped, then zoomed down, even though it was dark it

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