By writing in an active voice I got my point across clearly and effectively and created interest in the process. Those who write in a passive tone have a harder time of creating interest. In the paper there was a small amount of repetition of the fact that I wanted to become a “teacher or counselor” in order to “use my talents and gifts to bless those around me” and through this repetition I emphasized the major points of the essay. I was able to create enough emphasis without becoming redundant or too repetitive. The amount of repetition and the active voice that was portrayed throughout my paper helped in the purpose of explaining the long-range goals that I had
By writing in an active voice I got my point across clearly and effectively and created interest in the process. Those who write in a passive tone have a harder time of creating interest. In the paper there was a small amount of repetition of the fact that I wanted to become a “teacher or counselor” in order to “use my talents and gifts to bless those around me” and through this repetition I emphasized the major points of the essay. I was able to create enough emphasis without becoming redundant or too repetitive. The amount of repetition and the active voice that was portrayed throughout my paper helped in the purpose of explaining the long-range goals that I had