Writing
* Firstly, Secondly, Next, Finally = đầu tiên, thứ hai, tiếp đến, cuối cùng * As can clearly be seen from this example, … = ví dụ này cho thấy * It is clear that… = ….. là rất rõ ràng * Thus, therefore = do đó, bởi vậy * However, nevertheless = tuy nhiên * On one hand, on the other hand = ở mặt này, ở mặt khá * After analyzing both points of view, … = sau khi phân tích cà hai khía cánh * To provide a summary, to summarise, in conclusion … = để kết luận
Topic:
Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology. In what ways has technology affected the types of relationships people make?
Has this become a positive or negative development?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and/or experience. Write at least 250 words.
Example 1 (band 6)
Advancement in technology has resulted in a significant change of ways, the people interact with each other as these days cheap and easily options are available.The current wide availability of cell phones and internet has resulted in a resistance among people to physically meet and interact because people think that when they can communicate with their relatives and friends without physically meeting there, so why not interacting with them virtually. This has a significant bearing on the relationship people make only because meeting personally actually give people a sense of satisfaction and care. I know one of my neighbours, was complaining me about the same sort of incident. There lives an old man who is living alone as his only son is doing a job in different city. Several years before, his son was used to visit his father personally,however, as he could communicate now more on internet, his physical visits had reduced. The old men misses him a lot these days.Ideally, the technology benefits should be enriched in such a way that it should not negatively affects human’s lives. Unfortunately this doesn’t
Topic:
Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology. In what ways has technology affected the types of relationships people make?
Has this become a positive or negative development?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and/or experience. Write at least 250 words.
Example 1 (band 6)
Advancement in technology has resulted in a significant change of ways, the people interact with each other as these days cheap and easily options are available.The current wide availability of cell phones and internet has resulted in a resistance among people to physically meet and interact because people think that when they can communicate with their relatives and friends without physically meeting there, so why not interacting with them virtually. This has a significant bearing on the relationship people make only because meeting personally actually give people a sense of satisfaction and care. I know one of my neighbours, was complaining me about the same sort of incident. There lives an old man who is living alone as his only son is doing a job in different city. Several years before, his son was used to visit his father personally,however, as he could communicate now more on internet, his physical visits had reduced. The old men misses him a lot these days.Ideally, the technology benefits should be enriched in such a way that it should not negatively affects human’s lives. Unfortunately this doesn’t