on your analysis of both paragraphs and connect your argument to the thesis and to each other so you have a better evaluation of the discussed topic. There are several other small issues that I found. In paragraph 3 you used a long quote‚ which is 4+ lines‚ and it should be in a block format and indented. Also you used very short sentences such as‚ “Here are the quotes for the effect.” Using more complex sentences gives a better flow and a more professional look to your essay. You also had some
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managed a total of only 167 runs from 43.4 overs. Due to lack of form‚ Virender Sehwag had been dropped from the playing eleven and Ajinkya Rahane was selected as Gautam Gambhir’s new opening partner. But he could not prove his worth as he added only 4 runs while Gambhir made 15. The out of form Virat Kohli also struggled and returned to the pavilion with 7 runs to his name. The man who scored the highest for India was yet again the skipper‚ Mahendra Singh Dhoni. He scored 36 runs from 55 balls and
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Eva’s diary 14/08/1910 This is the most fortunate day of my life. I couldn’t believe I get a job in Birling’s factory. This factory is in the countryside‚ I like this environment‚ it is peaceful. There are lots of cool girls in the factory‚ I can’t make friends with them‚ we all know we are different‚ anyway‚ I enjoy the time to be along. My mom was so excited when I told her I got a job‚ I also told her I will earn lots of money and bring her a holiday. 12/09/1910 The work in the factory is monotonous
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My one day diary and its explanation Date: 18th June‚ 2008 The content I’m feeling uneasy due to stomachache today. It may have happened due to cheap dry food in my lunch. In these days‚ my learning pace and study habit is decreasing‚ which have made me worried. Yesterday many of my friends proposed me to go to night dance bar and restaurant for new experience. Although my friends accused me saving money was my motto‚ I did not accept their proposal. Explanation of my diary events I begin my writing
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ENTRY 1 After days of travelling‚ I have finally arrived at France. I have found France to be much more pleasant than Thornfield; here‚ I have no commitments and am free to do whatever I please. However‚ acting on impulse has always been one of my greatest flaws. Last night‚ when I attended ________’s dinner party‚ I came across a fair young lady‚ __________. I struck up a conversation with her and found her to be similar to other ladies. Upon first glance‚ she seemed to be charming and smart‚
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A specialist in seeking out Satan’s disciples‚ Rev. Hale travels to New England towns wherever rumors of witchcraft are present. Think of him as a puritan version of “The X-Files.” At first‚ the audience might find him to be just as self-righteous as Rev. Parris. However‚ Hale seeks out witches because in his own misguided way he wants to rid the world of evil. He speaks as though his methods are logical and scientific‚ when in fact he uses wives’ tales and mythology to root out so-called demons
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Nao’s family members are introduced in her diary‚ where the use of intertextuality reveals the characters of many members. Due to the restrictions in the number of words‚ the characters of the following members Jiko‚ Haruki#1 and Haruki#2 will be described through the use of intertextuality. Jiko Yasutani is Nao’s great grandmother that self proclaims to be a hundred and four years old. Nao’s diary provides the audience with factual information of the many roles she had. She was a nun‚ novelist
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BOOK REPORT: THE DIARY OF LADY MURASAKI SHIKIBU The author who brought to us The Tale of Genji‚ a novel now regarded as the first written novel in history‚ left behind an arguably more treasurable artifact: a diary that opens a window into history. The Diary of Lady Murasaki by Lady Murasaki Shikibu gives the reader a glimpse of the imperial court during eleventh century Japan and presents the past in an illuminated vision. Being an attendant in the imperial court‚ Lady Murasaki is frequently
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(Franiuk and Scherr 19). The female characters in The Vampire Diaries are magically enamored to the vampires‚ due to their stereotypical masculine portrayal. The beginning of the human/vampire relationship is connected to masculine depictions by the male vampires. Stefan‚ for example‚ demonstrates his skills on the football pitch before Elena and he get together (20). Elena is a down to earth girl with brunette hair and although she is popular at school and has some admirer‚ she does not present
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Q1 Shiplake is preparing its financial statements to 31 March 2012. The following situation has been identified by an impairment team. Shiplake has an item of earth-moving plant‚ which is hired out to companies on short-term contracts. Its carrying amount‚ based on cost model‚ is $400‚000. The estimated fair value of this asset is only $250‚000‚ with associated costs of disposal of $5‚000. A recent review of its value in use based on its forecast future cash flows was estimated at $500‚000. Since
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