During the revision of my poems many elements were changed. This included the length‚structure‚diction‚ opening and closing. All my poems got longer; most of them substantially. All of my poems grew by at least one stanza. This was not at all intentional as I feel poems should just be as long as the creator deems necessary; assuming they don’t need to meet specific criteria. This is what differentiates a poem from a song. Most songs are edited and manipulated to fit in the 3 - minute time slot radio
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a year ago‚ I faced my own near fatal struggle with adversity. Life had become more of a burden than an adventure and nothing seemed to be looking up. Things progressed and events occurred that produced life changing results. After nearly losing my life I realized that things needed to change‚ mindsets needed to change. The one thing that had not changed was my stubbornness. Unable to get to doctors that would help I looked for ways to return balance to the turmoil in my mind‚ one such way was
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obsessions‚ shaping to the current pop culture. I have been through these phases‚ just like anybody else‚ however‚ I find myself experiencing this more often than not. My family has always moved‚ whether it be in Ohio or all the way to Florida. During my elementary school year in Ohio‚ my parents sadly divorced. The split caused my brother and me to move so that
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My Careers Investigation By MaryBeth O’ Mahony Investigation of Myself My name is MaryBeth O’ Mahony. I attend Mercy Heights Secondary School in Skibbereen. I am 16 years old and will be 17 on July 25th. I live in Skibbereen town. I have one brother who’s in Leaving Cert at the moment. In school I try to get involved as much as possible especially in TY. I am part of a group called Fitter For the Future. Our group is trying too promote fitness in our school. I feel very
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My Inspiration I never imagined that one little‚ tiny human could change my life. I know they say that the second you see your child‚ you’ll experience a love that you’ll have experienced before. Although I didn’t have a child‚ the birth of my little sister sure allowed me to experience this love. At the ripe age of 13‚ I was beyond excited for my mom to have a baby. While I already had two siblings‚ they were closer to me in age. I was finally going to be able to take care of a baby‚ and there was
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the good of it.” In this line that you wrote I understood how you changed from hating hip hop to understanding it and liking it. The main point of this essay was to persuade me to try hip hop out because it might changed my life the same way it changed yours. I understand Mr. McBride that you were writing this article because you felt that it was important for me. Also you needed to share to everyone about what happened in your life and your story. In your article some of the key ideas were that hip
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I have always been a shy person and it was hard for me to get out of my shell and talk to people. Once I entered High School‚ I was introduced to my High School’s Theater Company and it changed my life. Theater has changed me into the committed‚ organized‚ and cooperative person that I am today. I am involved with stage crew in my Theater Company and this teaches me how to apply myself and my knowledge into work to create something amazing. I love seeing a play start from auditions to the last show-night
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Many of my peer’s excursions will start when they head to college or withdraw from their parent’s house; My journey started when I went through Stem-Cell Transplant for Sickle cell disease. Never would I have thought that I would be writing my college essay in a hospital bed‚ Sitting in the same room that ruined me just to relieve me of the crippling demon that followed me since birth. Overwhelming emotions held my heart hostage for seven months‚ but today they finally get released. Despite having
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within various areas of our land‚ due to transferable task of my dad. He was in Indian Army. I started out my primary education from Mumbai. I spent my early 6 years of childhood over there. In addition‚ I have been to Assam‚ West Bengal‚ Gujarat‚ Rajasthan‚ and Delhi. When I moved to Delhi‚ I grew up as teenage and self-dependent. Being brought-up in capital of India‚ it was a tremendous change for better life style. The golden days of my life that I have spent six years in Delhi. I lived in army camp
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English 111 paper #2 02-28-12 The Day That Changed My Mind Around three years ago from today my grandma was given the news that tore our family up. She was told she had around two in half years to live due to cirrhosis of the liver. She had a special case because cirrhosis of the liver is more common due to drinking too much alcohol. My grandma never drank a day in her life. Cirrhosis of the liver is a slowly progressing disease that replaces healthy liver tissue with scar tissue. Eventually
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