Throughout my writing experience I have always struggled with my body paragraphs. I tend to always have a strong introduction but once I began to go into my first body paragraph I lose my train of thought. One of my main issues is that I get to wordy. Which then leaves me with fragments. Lastly‚ which I’m sure most people have an issue with is basic grammar errors such as‚ spelling and placing commas. I feel that my writing has had a small progression. Through this class I have learned more writing
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Northwood‚ I felt uncomfortable with the language because it’s not my first. I did not know anyone or know anything really about the school. I knew nothing about the hockey program‚ academics‚ friends‚ coaches‚ teachers‚ life style‚ etc. When I first got into my room‚ I thought to myself‚ “ oh my god‚ this is going to be my room for the whole year…‚ I don’t know anyone and have any idea what anyone is like.. I’m going to be in my room for most of the year”. I felt so out of place being here for the
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My clinical skills in speculum exams‚ pregnancy visits‚ ultrasound results and contraceptive management improved vastly after working with Dr. Jain. I also had a great experience with my Family Nurse Practitioner preceptor‚ Paula Lowe. I became much more comfortable and proficient in interviewing and examining children‚ adolescent and adult patient
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My Academic Experience the Past Nine Weeks The long term results and value of completing a degree in higher education are many folded and range from financial to cultural. It is true that those of us who complete a degree benefit from higher paying jobs‚ but also can be said that we gain more acclaim and esteem among our peers as well. It seems that when you are educated and people are able to tell that you are educated you are treated differently than if you don’t have an education. You are able
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My writing experiences has had a big effect in my life‚ although they have been troublesome. It was the first time in my life that I can recall feeling bad about myself which I was affected by name spelling‚ bullying‚ and anger issues. Learning how to spell my name seemed as if it would to be an easy task. chraels. There‚ I was finished. I lifted my right hand contemplating to myself‚ I was intelligent. I’m the first to finish‚ I don’t need any help. Then it came‚ my teacher told me a comes before
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I chose to do the only thing I thought I could do to get it. I stole it. It was the most frightening and embarrassing experience I have ever had. It was late afternoon‚ around six o’clock‚ when my parents and I left for the grocery store. I was use to this because lately it had become a weekly routine. The week before‚ I saw something in the grocery store that had really caught my eye. It was an aisle filled with candies. Lollipops‚ Skittles‚ Hershey Kisses‚ and Bubble Gum‚ you name it‚ they had it
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from my family and friends‚ and always forgetting to eat. It got to the point where I just did what people told me to do‚ since I never knew what I wanted to do. The relationships I had with my family is not the dictionary normal. We never talked‚ which seemed shocking to all of my friends. My father was always getting drunk and being abusive towards me. Constantly yelling at me when no one was around. I’ve never felt so alone‚ being surrounded by so many people. The memories I shared with my sibling
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Returning to school at this time in my life has been a great challenge‚ I’m 29 years old and I know I have a long ways to go but I’ve had so many dreams ans aspiration that I wanted to complete before I turn 29. I plan to be done with college at 23 years old but ended up becoming pregnant at 22 years old and a mother at 23 years old so that shifted things for me with returning to school fully committed to my studies. During that time I just stayed working and making me and my son’s life a little easier.
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My family is extremely poor‚ living paycheck to paycheck and off of food stamps. My father is a construction worker/contractor who emigrated from Communist Bulgaria after the fall of the Iron Curtain‚ while my mother is a stay-at-home housewife with no higher education. As I grew older and more capable‚ naturally I was expected to help contribute in some way. This led to me having to constantly work and seek jobs from as early as 13 years old (typically babysitting or paper-route type jobs at this
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GS2520: Professional Communications Project Part 1: My Personal Commercial Ever since the age of ten‚ I have been interested in computers. My Uncle started us in computers as a means of introducing a new technology that would be useful in our futures. Since that time‚ I have owned and used a vast variety of computers in educational‚ work‚ and personal environments over the course of my life; I have always been intrigued by their function much to the point that after graduating high
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