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1. Kind of shoppers.
Do you like shopping? - It's usually best not to address the reader this way, and not to use second person ("you").
Everyone likes shopping but everyone has his own shopping personality.- You could just say "when he goes shopping" but this is more interesting.
Actually I like shopping. Every weekend I call my friend to go shopping but in fact the hate to go out with me - I think you meant "he hates to go out with me"; be sure to proofread carefully.because I do not buy anything. Actually it is my habit whenever I go shopping.
Although, most of my friend don't buy any thing but I do not know why they like to call me miser man. - This sentence does not really belong in your essay. Don't tell a story about yourself if you are supposed to be writing a classification essay.
There are three types of shopper such as intelligent shopper, impulsive shopper and window shopper when it comes to their buying habits. - If you say there are three types, do not say "such as"; that implies there are more than three.
The first type of shopper, "intelligent shopper," is the best type of shopper. The intelligent shopper makes plans before going shopping.
He goes directly to buy his needs and comes back directly; he does not stay a long time in the shop.
He does not buy something that he does not need. - The next part you have already said, so delete "also he does not spend most of time in the shop."
On the other hand, sometimes this kind of shopper thinks about money more than his desire.
For example, intelligent shopper sometimes likes to buy something it maybe force him in the shopping buy he will not buy it because he does not make plane for it and be scarily about the money. - This sentence does not make sense. Perhaps you meant "The intelligent shopper might be tempted to buy something that is not on his list, but worries that he will spend too much money." You can then delete the next sentence.
The second type of shopper is the impulsive
Do you like shopping? - It's usually best not to address the reader this way, and not to use second person ("you").
Everyone likes shopping but everyone has his own shopping personality.- You could just say "when he goes shopping" but this is more interesting.
Actually I like shopping. Every weekend I call my friend to go shopping but in fact the hate to go out with me - I think you meant "he hates to go out with me"; be sure to proofread carefully.because I do not buy anything. Actually it is my habit whenever I go shopping.
Although, most of my friend don't buy any thing but I do not know why they like to call me miser man. - This sentence does not really belong in your essay. Don't tell a story about yourself if you are supposed to be writing a classification essay.
There are three types of shopper such as intelligent shopper, impulsive shopper and window shopper when it comes to their buying habits. - If you say there are three types, do not say "such as"; that implies there are more than three.
The first type of shopper, "intelligent shopper," is the best type of shopper. The intelligent shopper makes plans before going shopping.
He goes directly to buy his needs and comes back directly; he does not stay a long time in the shop.
He does not buy something that he does not need. - The next part you have already said, so delete "also he does not spend most of time in the shop."
On the other hand, sometimes this kind of shopper thinks about money more than his desire.
For example, intelligent shopper sometimes likes to buy something it maybe force him in the shopping buy he will not buy it because he does not make plane for it and be scarily about the money. - This sentence does not make sense. Perhaps you meant "The intelligent shopper might be tempted to buy something that is not on his list, but worries that he will spend too much money." You can then delete the next sentence.
The second type of shopper is the impulsive