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Artifact: Mihonna Williams I picked a drill because in the book Brady was fooling around and “said lets drill in the sailboat.” J.T and Digger thought he was serious and drilled a hole in Mrs. D’s kayak.
I picked the red kayak because this kayak was seen by Brady before he was on his way to school knowing that there was an upcoming storm he didn’t warn them.
I picked the ambulance truck because this was Brady’s ride to school the day he saw the red kayak.
I picked the yellow life jacket because when Brady went looking for Ben the way he found him was bye his bright yellow life jacket also because tilly was baking in that direction an Brady followed.
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