His heavy usage of secondary sources demonstrates his reliance on other author’s arguments and ideas rather than constructing his own opinion from primary sources. For example, Calloway references various secondary sources, including Richard Lytle’s the Soldiers of America’s First Army when writing, “the army was ineffective at anything other than local police action” (20). Moreover, Calloway provides information that is not relevant to his argument, such as detailing the land purchases made by different companies, the political structure of Native Americans, and his failure to compare it directly to the political structure of the U.S. Furthermore, despite the book focusing on acknowledging Indian victory, Calloway focuses excessively on the American perspective rather than the Indian perspective. For instance, there was only one chapter devoted to the Indians while the rest of the book focused on problems faced by Americans. Although he mentions Indians in the other chapters, the focal point are the
His heavy usage of secondary sources demonstrates his reliance on other author’s arguments and ideas rather than constructing his own opinion from primary sources. For example, Calloway references various secondary sources, including Richard Lytle’s the Soldiers of America’s First Army when writing, “the army was ineffective at anything other than local police action” (20). Moreover, Calloway provides information that is not relevant to his argument, such as detailing the land purchases made by different companies, the political structure of Native Americans, and his failure to compare it directly to the political structure of the U.S. Furthermore, despite the book focusing on acknowledging Indian victory, Calloway focuses excessively on the American perspective rather than the Indian perspective. For instance, there was only one chapter devoted to the Indians while the rest of the book focused on problems faced by Americans. Although he mentions Indians in the other chapters, the focal point are the