The smell of the flowers gives off a calming effect. The birds occasionally swoop past and there is a gentle breeze coming through the trees. Some people are walking their dogs. The dog’s fur is a soft pillow that cushions a person while they sleep. The dog’s nose is moist and cold. The asphalt is nice and smooth. There are no cracks or bumps and it adds to the surrounds. The sunlight comes through the trees creating patterns on the ground. The sunlight’s heat is gentle and not too hot. The whole park is clean and family friendly. It is an atmosphere perfect for enjoying any day of the week. Going to the park is one everyday experience that some people have. It is filled with children playing, great smells, and pleasant sights. The descriptive alternatives to use instead of sight and sound, would taste, touch, and smell. Describing sound and sight to a person who cannot experience either is challenging. By using descriptive words that do not use sound and sight, it will help them relate better to my experience. The reader will still be able to know that the topic is scenery but, will be able to relate to it better when using the other human senses to better describe
The smell of the flowers gives off a calming effect. The birds occasionally swoop past and there is a gentle breeze coming through the trees. Some people are walking their dogs. The dog’s fur is a soft pillow that cushions a person while they sleep. The dog’s nose is moist and cold. The asphalt is nice and smooth. There are no cracks or bumps and it adds to the surrounds. The sunlight comes through the trees creating patterns on the ground. The sunlight’s heat is gentle and not too hot. The whole park is clean and family friendly. It is an atmosphere perfect for enjoying any day of the week. Going to the park is one everyday experience that some people have. It is filled with children playing, great smells, and pleasant sights. The descriptive alternatives to use instead of sight and sound, would taste, touch, and smell. Describing sound and sight to a person who cannot experience either is challenging. By using descriptive words that do not use sound and sight, it will help them relate better to my experience. The reader will still be able to know that the topic is scenery but, will be able to relate to it better when using the other human senses to better describe