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Day 7: A Fictional Narrative
Day 7: plot
At the end of Mia’s concert one of the ushers found Adam and said Mia wanted to see him. The usher lead Adam down to a small room backstage , where he meet Mia. They are both awkward when they talk, they haven't seen each other in three years. While Mia is talking Adam has a panic attack, but he tries to make sure Mia doesn't see it. After they talk for a couple minutes, they say their goodbyes. As Adam leaves he describes it as, “leaving me out here on the Rapids, and Mia back there on the shore.”

Day 8: conflict
When Adam steps outside he is trying to figure out what to do, then suddenly Mia comes up to him. They start talking again like they haven't been apart for years. They eventually decide to go get something to eat. As the two walk down the street Mia takes a phone call, which makes Adam remember that the old Mia would never do that, she hated phones. As Adam is walking a paparazzi flags him down, and he asks for just one picture. He think
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The garden was a big area of grass with brick paths, lined by flower gardens. Flying around were fireflies, that flashed every once in awhile. The the setting changed to a MTV awards ceremony in L.A. Shooting Star was nominated for a song they made for Hello Killer, the movie. When he went out to smoke he met Bryn Shraeder. Who would later become his girlfriend.

Day 10: character
For the rest of the chapter Adam Wilde is talking about how he met Bryn, his girlfriend. Adam didn't really talk or think about Brynin the beginning of the story . He talks about how they met, and how their relationship has changed. When they first started dating, they we like a regular couple. Now they are never at the same place at the same time, but when they are it's awkward. Bryn sometimes says he should go back to his “ghost girl”, and that Mia is what is between them. Adam think their relationship has changed a lot. Which it sound like it has.

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