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First of all we travelled to London by train. It took about four to five hours. We stayed in a 3 star hotel with four bedrooms. We visited icons such as the London eye, national gallery, the Tower of London and Madam Tussauds. The national gallery was very nice, painting by famous painters. The London eye was amazing and you can see the whole city in it. The Tower of London was very beautiful and it is amazing how it was built so long ago. Madam Tussauds was very impressive, the famous people almost looked real. My friends and I got on really well with each other. We visited so many places together; we took pictures together, we played bowling with each other. We went to the IMAX cinema to see a movie. On the last day we decided to celebrate by eating in an expensive restaurant
First of all we travelled to London by train. It took about four to five hours. We stayed in a 3 star hotel with four bedrooms. We visited icons such as the London eye, national gallery, the Tower of London and Madam Tussauds. The national gallery was very nice, painting by famous painters. The London eye was amazing and you can see the whole city in it. The Tower of London was very beautiful and it is amazing how it was built so long ago. Madam Tussauds was very impressive, the famous people almost looked real. My friends and I got on really well with each other. We visited so many places together; we took pictures together, we played bowling with each other. We went to the IMAX cinema to see a movie. On the last day we decided to celebrate by eating in an expensive restaurantFirst of all we travelled to London by train. It took about four to five hours. We stayed in a 3 star hotel with four bedrooms. We visited icons such as the London eye, national gallery, the Tower of London and Madam Tussauds. The national gallery was very nice, painting by famous painters. The London eye was amazing and you can see the whole city in it. The Tower of London was very beautiful and it is amazing how

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