Essay 3
Do people accomplish more when they are allowed to do things in their own way?
More and more opportunities are being created since people have realized that they can do anything in their own. And there is no doubt that at times anyone may be shy and fed up with work. But some people think that individuals can do well when they do things themselves. But i do not support this statement. First of all, of course it depends on person. Some people might feel shyness and cannot be able to perform simple things in front of public. While, others cannot do well without supervision. But in my point of view, under pressure and control people can do their best. Take for example, SAT test. In writing section of this text you have to write an essay in 25 minutes, while in IELTS you are allowed to write it in 40 minutes. In the beginning, you may consider it as an impossible thing like I did. But now I think it is possible for me and I can handle this despite all boundaries. Secondly, when people get freedom to do somethimg, they also get a lazy. They think it is not so reqiured or compulsory. For instance, every student is tend to prepare only right before the exams. Because of that almost half of them get fail. To conclude, after having analysed the issue, however there some poeple who likely to do more things lonely, the majority of them prefer to be controlled and supervised and they perform more efficient work.
246 words.
More and more opportunities are being created since people have realized that they can do anything in their own. And there is no doubt that at times anyone may be shy and fed up with work. But some people think that individuals can do well when they do things themselves. But i do not support this statement. First of all, of course it depends on person. Some people might feel shyness and cannot be able to perform simple things in front of public. While, others cannot do well without supervision. But in my point of view, under pressure and control people can do their best. Take for example, SAT test. In writing section of this text you have to write an essay in 25 minutes, while in IELTS you are allowed to write it in 40 minutes. In the beginning, you may consider it as an impossible thing like I did. But now I think it is possible for me and I can handle this despite all boundaries. Secondly, when people get freedom to do somethimg, they also get a lazy. They think it is not so reqiured or compulsory. For instance, every student is tend to prepare only right before the exams. Because of that almost half of them get fail. To conclude, after having analysed the issue, however there some poeple who likely to do more things lonely, the majority of them prefer to be controlled and supervised and they perform more efficient work.
246 words.