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It is a great paragraph and well-written. The only changes I see are some minor corrections, but I would not change your paragraph as to its content.
There is some punctuation that might make it easier to read. Your sentence structure is complex and with so many commas I had to read the sentence beginning with Boo twice. You might want to consider using colons,semi-colons, dashes in such complex sentences.
In your opening you need to hyphenate six-year old Scout. I think African-American should be hyphenated. Also, black man against a white woman - in this context you are trying to say black vs. white, so I think both should be lower case.
It is a great paragraph and well-written. The only changes I see are some minor corrections, but I would not change your paragraph as to its content.
There is some punctuation that might make it easier to read. Your sentence structure is complex and with so many commas I had to read the sentence beginning with Boo twice. You might want to consider using colons,semi-colons, dashes in such complex sentences.
In your opening you need to hyphenate six-year old Scout. I think African-American should be hyphenated. Also, black man against a white woman - in this context you are trying to say black vs. white, so I think both should be lower case.
It is a great paragraph and well-written. The only changes I see are some minor corrections, but I would not change your paragraph as to its content.
There is some punctuation that might make it easier to read. Your sentence structure is complex and with so many commas I had to read the sentence beginning with Boo twice. You might want to consider using colons,semi-colons, dashes in such complex sentences.
In your opening you need to hyphenate six-year old Scout. I think African-American should be hyphenated. Also, black man against a white woman - in this context you are trying to say black vs. white, so I think both should be lower case.
It is a great paragraph and
There is some punctuation that might make it easier to read. Your sentence structure is complex and with so many commas I had to read the sentence beginning with Boo twice. You might want to consider using colons,semi-colons, dashes in such complex sentences.
In your opening you need to hyphenate six-year old Scout. I think African-American should be hyphenated. Also, black man against a white woman - in this context you are trying to say black vs. white, so I think both should be lower case.
It is a great paragraph and well-written. The only changes I see are some minor corrections, but I would not change your paragraph as to its content.
There is some punctuation that might make it easier to read. Your sentence structure is complex and with so many commas I had to read the sentence beginning with Boo twice. You might want to consider using colons,semi-colons, dashes in such complex sentences.
In your opening you need to hyphenate six-year old Scout. I think African-American should be hyphenated. Also, black man against a white woman - in this context you are trying to say black vs. white, so I think both should be lower case.
It is a great paragraph and well-written. The only changes I see are some minor corrections, but I would not change your paragraph as to its content.
There is some punctuation that might make it easier to read. Your sentence structure is complex and with so many commas I had to read the sentence beginning with Boo twice. You might want to consider using colons,semi-colons, dashes in such complex sentences.
In your opening you need to hyphenate six-year old Scout. I think African-American should be hyphenated. Also, black man against a white woman - in this context you are trying to say black vs. white, so I think both should be lower case.
It is a great paragraph and