Essay On Open Campus Lunch

Luckily, I only needed one proposal before my claim was approved. However, it did take quite a while due to thinking and rethinking the claim over in order to be certain that the proposal I wanted was the one which I really cared to presented. My claim, that students should not have an open campus lunch, was challenging to work with while making a visual. I knew how I wanted to display my message, but many times it wasn't giving off the vibe which I was hoping for. Personally, the proposal for me was the easiest part, I knew exactly the argument I wanted to make, and found it easy to put that into words. On the other hand, the visual portion of the essay was the most stressful. Most of my time was spent online trying to find the perfect pictures. Everyone says that the internet has so much stuff on it, just not the ‘stuff’ I needed to form my visual. My essay was backed by mostly facts and statistics. Through research I found it difficult to come up with statistics already on open lunch, so I was forced to be creative with how I pieced my puzzle together. Choosing color, font, and background was more of a guess and check type of process in order to find what did and did not work. I
After reading the NYT articles that is something I tried to adopt, and I would like to think I was successful upon doing so. I found myself reusing a few words quite often. In order to fix this I tried to find synonyms- which I believed helped cut out the repetition of a few words. If I were to start the entire process over I would have started by first researching more and finding more facts before starting any other piece of the essay, like it tells us to do in Writing Well . In conclusion, this essay would have been much easier if the specific subject of “having an open lunch” had more statistics along with it, also, it was interesting to be able to show my creative side while doing the