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'Eva And Brier's Short Story: The House'
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There was a section of land that was known to be cursed. Anyone who went across the land without holding their breath would be cursed for the rest of their lives. It was said that a girl was dared to stay the night at the house, and nobody seen her again. What happened to her, nobody had been brave enough to go see. Until this group of friends came along.

Their names were Eva, Jackson, Jace, and Brier. Brier had heard many things about the house, nothing that scared her though. Being the daredevil she was, she wanted to go to the house and look around. Eva and Jackson had lived most of their lives in the same place. They knew everyone who had went in and never came out. It wasn’t many, because they were all too scared. Jace was
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We can go now…” She said, stuffing her phone in her pocket. They all walked out of the room, and then down the stairs to go outside. Jackson and Jace stayed behind the two girls, not even needing to speak to each other to know that they were both thinking the same thing; this idea Brier had, was not the best.

After they all got into two of their cars, having two in each car, and drove to the house, they parked on the street. Brier turned the keys and then took them out of the ignition, stuffing them in her sweatpants pocket. They all got out, not in any specific order. Brier walked up the driveway slowly, and everyone followed her.

Suddenly, she turned around and looked at them. “I’m going in for sure,” She told them. “Who’s going to come in with me?” She asked the three. Jace looked at the other two, before he raised his hand slightly as if he were to tell her that he would go in with her.

The other two decided to come up with them, but not enter, in case someone needed their help from the outside. Or incase someone came by, which wasn’t expected sense nobody ever went by it that new of the legends. The four friends began walking towards the house. Just being near the house Brier noticed a drastic change. Even the air seemed different, almost

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