Example Of Peer Review Essay

WOOF. WOOF. It was August 8th, 2016. I asked my mom the day before, for the 100th time, if we could PLEASE get a puppy. She looked up some poodle mixes and we found some dogs with the breed name of Cavapoo. It was the 7th of August, and the puppies got released on the 8th of August. My mom called the breeder, and she said there would be none left if we came later in the week. In that moment, we all knew, that was the day to go!
At 3:00 pm the next day, we headed to play with the puppies in Mundelein, Illinois. The car was filled with my mom, brother, and myself. A hour and a half later, we showed up to a kind of unique looking neighborhood. We went inside, and when you opened the door there was a checkout counter to the right, doggy treat
It was pretty clear that she was bored of being in that corner so we brought her outside where she could be a little more free. When we got outside, it was the prettiest summer night with a breeze at our backs. Through teary eyes I watched the sun fall behind the horizon, painting the sky shades of red and pink. Our neighbors to the right of our house were outside, too. All of the them darted over as quickly as they could. Bella showed zero emotion when all the people were holding her. We tried to get her up and awake by throwing a tennis ball down the sidewalk a few times. She didn’t like that idea so we just sat in the grass. We thought she was the calmest dog because all she did was lay in the grass. We thought that we would have so much fun with her! I hope Bella is the only dog we get the pleasure to have because she deserves the title of a ‘man’s best friend’. She is loyal, intelligent, devoted and affectionate animal. She quickly learned how to do tricks and ring the bell to go outside. Bella is truly loved and foremost the best dog anyone could have. I will never forget the first time I saw Bella and the first time I held her in my arms. She is now part of the