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Greatest Story Ever Told
The truth is told!
“Shawn, hurry up now you’re going to be late for your graduation”. Shawn was running late for her high school graduation. “Mama I’m coming right now I just need to find my heels. “Girl I don’t know why you never get your stuff ready at night”. “Found them”, she screamed. Shawn came down stares running as her mom looked at her with tears in her eyes. “Oh mom stop it stop crying so much you know I hate mushiness”, she giggled to herself. “But you are my baby and I can’t believe your graduating, I feel like I’m losing my best friend”.” You’re not losing me geeezzzz”, she said. Shawn was a straight A high school student she loved school so much she was very athletic and had a personality to die for. She always smiled and kept a positive attitude until you made her mad. She was very popular at school because of her school spirit, not to mention the guys loved her. Shawn was 5’2, 125, and very dark skinned, she wore her hair in a wrap every day, and when she would let it down it would flow down her back. Her lips complemented her smile which she wore lip gloss every day always flavored. “Ma how you going to yell at me about not being ready, and you not even ready”, Shawn said with a sassy attitude”. “I’m coming girl, so hush and umm what time is D, Andre, and Jazz coming you know we got 1 hour to get there”, “they should be on their way, you know Andre takes forever to get dress I’m a call them. Shawn picked up her phone to call D since she knew he would be the only one to pick up.
D: Hello
Shawn: hey boo, you ready to graduate?
D: oh of course. I’m ready to be out this bitch
Shawn: Oh wow, you are silly, but um where you guys?
D: oh we are pulling up right now.
Shawn: Oh okay. The door is unlocked so just come in.
D: okay bye
Shawn: alright
The crew comes in the house, but Shawn is still up stares putting on makeup.
Mom: hey babies
Crew: Hey Ms. Johnson
Ms. Johnson: I see you guys look like you are ready to graduate.
Crew: True
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